Hey listen – Your ideal customers… they’re like you and me.
When they’re in the market for a new product – let’s say – a new iPhone.
They don’t really want the product per se, it’s the transformation they’re after.
The iPhone is simply a vehicle for the result or outcome they desire. And in the case of the iPhone, it’s most likely an increase in status.
So that they can finally tune into that ideal version of themselves.
But here’s the problem…
Right now, your copy is singing a completely different tune.
It’s somehow selling the product more than the outcome.
So your ads are emphasising on features like, ‘1000mAh mobile battery’ or ‘low-calorie drink, ’25x wide-angle lens.’
Take a moment to think about it,
Is your prospect likely read this and go, “Oh my goodness, I have to have this mobile because it has this amazing 1000mAh battery.”
He’s probably thinking, ‘Umm, so what? What’s in it for me?’
Now imagine reframing the conversation to say, ‘Increase your battery’s life by 60% so you can enjoy 3D gaming on your long commute without worrying about running out of juice.’
Now that’s something that’ll get your audience flippin’.
Because you’ve helped your prospects visualise the experience of your product before the actual purchase,
They’re excited and already emotionally invested in the rewards.
By describing the benefits in vivid detail, you’ve raised purchase intent significantly.
That’s my secret sauce to writing Facebook ads that convert like crazy.
Go ahead, make this one change in your copy and watch your sales go KABOOM!
Have any copy-related questions?
Fire away, in the comments section below.
This is a conversation I’ve come across so often among Facebook ad marketers.
“I’m pumping $$$ into my Facebook ad campaigns but to no avail.
“I know it’s possible to profit from FB ads, yet somehow it isn’t working for me. “
“Now I feel like I’m flushing my hard-earned $$$ down the drain.”
An industry study by Wordstream suggests that almost 92% of social media marketers claim to use Facebook Ads.
Yet there are so many who try and struggle at generating positive and consistently high conversion rate results.
Often, it comes down to a case of poor targeting + messaging.
Random people across social media, who don’t know you, are looking at your ads and going… ‘ugh, why is this ad on my newsfeed?’
The result: Conversion rates that make you cringe.
But it doesn’t have to stay that way.
Get laser-focused with your messaging by creating problem-focused personas of your ideal buyers.
There is, after all, a difference between the perceived benefits of a real estate agent buying an iPhone vis a vis an 18-year old college student.
The problems, desires and goals are extremely different for both these segments.
When you know what the audience group likes and wants,
Your message is automatically more tuned in to reflect their situation and showcases results that get them excited.
Now, they’re more likely to respond to your offers.
Follow this one tip, and you’ll find that your offer is highly likely to convert.
Save $$$ and scale your store by increasing the number of orders you get.
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🤫 Introverts – Sorry We Messed Up! Ecommerce Ad Copywriting Lessons for Every Marketer From Mistakes Introverts Made [Now Drive eCommerce sales without being trapped at your Desk]
👀 If you’ve been watching… over the last 3-4 years, there has been a lot of buzz on social media ’bout introverts.
After Susan Cain delivered her “Popular” Ted Talk (#11 on most watched Ted Talks list) on – the Power of introverts – all of the introverts in the world felt united and… in a sense found a voice to explain their choices.
😎 As an introvert myself, I LOVED that talk – Probably watched it 10+ times in the last few years.
Felt like – “YAAAAS”, peeps like me do exist.
And – WOW! I’m not the only one with all these crazy struggles.
But then some folks blew this entire introvert-extrovert narrative completely out of proportions.
😵 And a part of the internet went nuts feeling entitled about their so-called “introversion”.
What followed were… meme’s, gifs and articles spreading all over the internet like wildfire – justifying why extroverts suck.
And how introverts are uber-cool beings – perfect creatures in an apparently crazy (*ahem* extroverted) world.
👎 A blatant distortion of the truth – Not intended by the author. And super insulting to any extrovert (I hear y’all).
Anyhoo, why do I bring this up today?
Well, when it comes to selling your products online with Facebook Ads – avoid making this very same mistake when talking to your prospects and customers.
✍️ Lemme explain…
This quote by famous Adman – Ogilvy sums it up perfectly.
“The consumer is not a moron. She’s your wife. Don’t insult her intelligence.”
What does this mean?
Well… there are three specific points I’d emphasise on – things that you ought to be careful about in your Ads and videos if you want them to convert well.
1. 👉 Avoid fluff
Tell ’em – Why your solution will solve their problem, why they should buy from you, and why should they do so now.
Remember to back up your Ad copy claims with real data (if available – DO NOT MAKE UNBACKED CLAIMS – Health and Supplement Brands I’m looking at y’all). 🙂
Always USE case-studies or benefits that can be well demonstrated.
2. 👉 Talk to your customers with respect
Your customers DO have a problem. And they’re actively seeking solutions to address them.
But don’t put them off by talking down to them or by being condescending. The magic word is “empathy.”
Remember to treat your audience with respect. Talk to them like you’d talk to your pals. Refer to them as “you” in your Ad copy. After all, you need them more than they need you when closing a sale.
3. 👉 Make it as personal as possible
Most people conjure up the image of this metaphorical “MAN” standing in the middle of a stadium shouting into a MEGAPHONE when it comes to Advertising.
Although not wholly incorrect – this approach works well with brands that have massive Ad budgets eg. Coke and Pepsi.
But as eCommerce marketers, you KNOW that the riches are in the niches. You aren’t a multinational brand.
The only way to access these riches is when you get up close and personal with your audiences.
So whenever you’re talking to your audience – Write/create your ads to speak to a very targeted demographic.
Back in the 90’s with billboard advertising, this was impossible to do.
But with online advertising and granular targeting options within Facebook, this is easier than ever.
Write different Ads to speak to the different segments within your target audience. For, e.g. if you’re makeup brand, you want to talk differently to a 19-year-old girl and a 45-year-old woman.
If I were to summarise all of this… in one sentence, I’d say.
“Keep your audience first when coming up with your Ad and Video copy.”
I know I know, so simple to say but soooo hard to implement. And we need to be reminded again and again until it drills in deep down 🙂
Keep every piece of Ad messaging specific, friendly and backed with proof. This way – you can drive eCommerce sales without being trapped at your Desk.
👉 So the other day I was doing my thing… when a telemarketer called, and the phone in my jeans vibrated with a loud zzzzzzzz
Usually, I don’t entertain telemarketing calls.
And the caller id indicated – it was supposedly from a telemarketing agency.
Wasn’t 100% sure tho… and thought it could be my bank calling (was expecting) – so I took the call anyway.
So… the lady on the other side… she went straight into the pitch trying to sell me on a new Credit Card.
And I was about to tell her that…
I’m NOT interested. DON’T need one.
👌 What she did turned things around completely.
🚶♀️ Instead of wasting time telling me about all the BENEFITS of the card, she swiftly moonwalked into objection handling.
And within the first 15-20 seconds, she let me know that the card had ZERO ANNUAL FEE and would require NO PAPERWORK UPFRONT – meaning- t’was a fully pre-approved card.
✅ All I had to say was “YES, I’m IN” and they would ship the card to me. They already had my details on file as a customer of the same bank.
If you ask me, my biggest OBJECTIONS with credit cards is the annual fee and paperwork process involved when applying for one.
As such, I do not NEED another credit card.
But hey, they do come handy, don’t they?
…Of course, they do.
So even though I didn’t need one – upon just hearing those two objections addressed – my eyes lit up.
And I asked her a few questions about the card.
🏁 And BOOM! She closed me on the credit card in less than 3 minutes on the phone.
What’s the point of this story?
🗣️ Way too often – you’re talking and boasting about your brand in your ads. Saying stuff like “We believe”, “We have the best” yada yada thing in town.
And no-one cares about the “best thingy” you have to offer!
Don’t waste your valuable ad real estate on words that DO NOT MAKE A SALE.
Talk to the objections your customers might have with your product or your brand.
👍 Have you been in business for over a DECADE?
Mention that LOUD and clear in your ads.
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Objection handling can skyrocket conversions especially for your Middle and Bottom of Funnel Ads.
The quickest way to build trust with your prospects and customers and make a sale is to pre-emptively answer questions they may already have in their minds.
Over to you.
💸 Go thou apply and profiteth ye with this piece of advice.
To write Facebook ads that generate leads and customers for your eCom brand.
– You need not spend countless hours handwriting famous sales letters
– You need not read hundreds of books on copywriting?
– You don’t have to go to college and spend $100k on a super-advanced degree.
To write high converting Ad Copy, you need –
1. To have a DEEP understanding of your product. The real goal is to find out what makes your product unique and what benefits and features will appeal to your customers. Finally, what PAIN POINTS are alleviated by your product.
EG. AD HEADLINE – Paying Too Much for Your Car Insurance?
PAIN – Paying Too Much. Then your Ad Copy or Creative must alleviate/pain this pain, thus leading to your product.
2. Have a DEEP understanding of your customers.
How do you do this?
Customer surveys can be a lifesaver. Instead of second guessing what your customers want, ask them directly.
HOT TIP – Don’t already have a customer base? Read and follow testimonials/reviews that customers leave for competitor products on competitor sites. You’ll learn a LOT about your markets pains and pleasures from there.
3. Make Sure you Ads have all of these elements
1. Attention-grabbing headline – Ad headline. Make sure your headlines are specific. Specificity typically refers to a particular outcome/benefit. Also, including a target demographic may help.
Eg. Soccer Moms do this to keep their kids active.
Eg. Keep losing weight even after you’re back from the GYM.
2. For the Newsfeed link – You could alternate between – Urgency elements, a USP, Ultrashort testimonials or a straight benefit.
Eg. 0% Credit Card interest on EMI’s. Buy now, Pay Later. Free Shipping – only today!
3. For eCommerce, make sure your creatives use an amazing thumbnail with 20% Copy. Again, follow the same headline guidelines for thumbnail copy.
4. Ad Text – Use ‘you’ language and talk to your customers conversationally. A paragraph of copy is mostly good enough. But this may vary based on your campaign goal. For example, in TOFU/Brand awareness ads, you may want to get into storytelling and write longer ads to build trust with your customers.
5. CTA – Make sure to add your store link to the CTA even in your Ad Text. Makes it easier for customers, and helps drive traffic.
📉 Writing Facebook ads is kinda hard.
Especially those headlines and Newsfeed Descriptions.
How do you convey your selling proposition in such few words?
I browse through a ton of Facebook ads every day. And there’s a common mistake I keep seeing over and over.
Poor Ad copy inevitably includes words like
in the Ads and Videos.
And to be honest – those words mean nothing to your buyers.
The only thing you gain by using those words is… missed opportunities.
So what do you do?
How do you eradicate words like “Perfect” from your dictionary – which add NO value to buyers?
Firstly, for the ads you run, ENSURE your copy is hitting some of the markets pain points.
Say for example – you’re selling to busy mums.
❌ don’t say stuff like –❌
We offer the best product/product name for busy mums.
✅ instead, what you can say is ✅
Here’s a way for busy mums to save time planning meals
Whenever y’all are tempted to use any of these catch-all phrases, just ask yourself –
How/why is this best?
What makes it high quality?
What does “perfect” mean for my audience?
The answer to those questions should ideally be – benefit statements, positioning statements, stories or proof statements.
It’s a missed opportunity in terms of your messaging when you fail to apply this. Its also kinda lazy copywriting if your copywriter tends to lean towards using jargon and catch-phrases like a crutch.
I’m not saying… these words don’t have a place in your Ads. But make sure to use them wisely.
Also, by being specific – you get to drive and attract qualified traffic to your store.
💥 Apply this to your Ad Copy and see your sales go KA-BOOOM 💥
How often do you find yourselves using words like high-quality and perfect in your Ad copy?